I agree... some repeats would give it a more consistent 'portfolio' feel rather than a 'scrapbook' feel. If, say, every third spread was the same, that would tie in the book a lot better.
Really nice! I call it: "Simple Glamour." Great for showing off your photos. Really nice variation of page layouts - I might add in some more "repeats."
Impressive! My only comment is the "add story here" page without photo items shouldn't have some differences, like one should have a small photo item or something.
Portfolio Theme Book - Page Text Content
S: My Portfolio
FC: My Portfolio | Your Name Here
27: Edit your subtitle here | Edit your title here | About this book