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BC: By: Eliezer Flores

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1: Character Diary Mr. Henry

2: “Joe, focus,” I nodded. “Yes, I’m focusing,” Joe replied. “This is the letter J,” I explained. “Have you seen this letter before?” “Yes!”Joe yelled. "Okay, let’s not get too excited,” I requested. “Where have you seen this letter?” “My name, Joe, it has that letter!” Joe screamed. “Yes, Joe your name has this letter,” I giggled. “What’s so funny suh?” Joe asked. “You,” I answered. You really like learning don’t you? You’re always smiling like my nephews” “Yes, I do,” Joe agreed. So have you thought about going across the river,” I whispered. “I don’t know, suh,” Joe complained. Are you sure it’s not a trap?” “I’m positive,” I admitted. “Why you ask?” “I just wanted to know,” he sighed,” It’s because I wanted to take others and I don’t want them to be worried.” “Oh, ok,” I acknowledged. “But I promised that you’ll make it. Just remember to follow the road and hear an owl hoot three times.” “Okay suh,” Joe announced.

3: I really hope nothing happens to that young man, I thought. He and his fellow people should be free and not have to suffer under this abomination. “Well I’ll see you around Mr. Henry,” Joe hinted. And as soon as I heard him said “see you around,” I knew he was going to escape. But all I said was “Okay. I hope you have a great trip.” Watching as the door pushed him out. “Thank you so much Mr. Henry, “Joe interrupted he left the store with a smile.” I really hope nothing ruins their way to freedom. They don’t deserve to be enslaved, I said to myself. He is a great young man and he deserves to be free. But I still think something is going to happen. I should at least look out just in case they are being hunted down. | I really hope nothing happens to that young man, I thought. He and his fellow people should be free and not have to suffer under this abomination. “Well I’ll see you around Mr. Henry,” Joe hinted. And as soon as I heard him said “see you around,” I knew he was going to escape. But all I said was “Okay. I hope you have a great trip.” Watching as the door pushed him out. “Thank you so much Mr. Henry, “Joe interrupted he left the store with a smile.” I really hope nothing ruins their way to freedom. They don’t deserve to be enslaved, I said to myself. He is a great young man and he deserves to be free. But I still think something is going to happen. I should at least look out just in case they are being hunted down.

4: Character Diary Mr. Henry

6: I am in my coach with a bright lantern in one hand and a rough rope in the other. I see this dull night. The angry rain was coming down hard and loud. Nothing out here, I thought. I guess it was a horrible, scary night to be out. I doubt Joe and his wonderful friends were going to escape tonight, I said to myself. The brutal rain seems to get harder, faster and harsh. The crazy rain is noisy and I’m the only one out here. Crack, a nervous noise sound came in the distance. It sounded like a thin twig or speechless stick braking. The rain was noisy but I could still hear rattling. It was getting late and the rain seemed to get faster. That’s when I saw something in the helpless distance. At that frightening moment I got closer and his worried face finally became clearer. Everyone managed to fit in my little coach. And as they got in I knew it was time to hurry. | I am in my coach with a bright lantern in one hand and a rough rope in the other. I see this dull night. The angry rain was coming down hard and loud. Nothing out here, I thought. I guess it was a horrible, scary night to be out. I doubt Joe and his wonderful friends were going to escape tonight, I said to myself. The brutal rain seems to get harder, faster and harsh. The crazy rain is noisy and I’m the only one out here. Crack, a nervous noise sound came in the distance. It sounded like a thin twig or speechless stick braking. The rain was noisy but I could still hear rattling. It was getting late and the rain seemed to get faster. That’s when I saw something in the helpless distance. At that frightening moment I got closer and his worried face finally became clearer. Everyone managed to fit in my little coach. And as they got in I knew it was time to hurry.

7: My heart was beginning to pound rapidly. The cruel road was wide but not narrow. The rain was still pounded harder like if rocks were hitting it. the rain wouldn’t stop. Then in an instant, it got chilly. The wind was so strong it almost flipped the whole coach. The extreme road was uneven. My hands were shaky and cold. That’s when I knew I had to stay calm and be brave. With the dangerous thunder hitting the growling ground it was hard to be brave. With the terrorizing ground shaking everyone was starting to get scared, including my dear horse. Finally, with my precious horse out of breath, we had made it to our amazing destination. My great friend, his friends and his beautiful wife to be thanked me. I saw them run towards a plain boat. As soon as the dazzling light from the boat went into the magnificent darkness, I knew they were going be happy and free. As they left the rain seemed to get weakening. I smiled and began to drive back slowly and happily.

8: Travel Brochure

10: This is our lovely waterfall. We name our waterfall Miss Scylla. This waterfall is one of a kind. It is beautiful and relaxing. There are no dangerous animals at this location. Only the gorgeous sounds of the enchanted birds. This waterfall is amazing in its own way. This waterfall is not deep or not too shallow. Its perfect for children and adult. This magnificent location is one of our main tourist attractions. You may go and relax yourself as long as you like. We hope that you will enjoy yourself and to have fun. But we require that you’ll pick up after yourself when you are done. | Precious Island | Precious Island | Precious Island

12: Alliteration | Allusion | Assonance | Simile | Metaphor | Literary Devices

13: Onomatopoeia | Hyperbole | Personification | Parody | Oxymoron | Literary Devices

14: Literary Devices Assonance – “Cold wind blows” by Eminem This song contains an example of assonance in this verse “the cold wind blow when it snows and its twenty be-low ask me why man I just don't know the words cold, blow, snow, be-low, and know have all the same “o” sound. Alliteration – “Not Alone” by Linkin Park This song has an example of alliteration in the first verse “I break down, fear is sinking in the cold comes, racing through my skin Searching for a way to get to you through the storm” this is an example because it has the first sound “S”. Simile - “Roman’s Revenge” by Nicki Minaj ft. Eminem This song has an example of a simile when it says “I'ma stick it to 'em like refrigerator magnets.” This is an example of a simile because it uses the word like to compare two things. In this case it’s comparing him to refrigerator magnets. This means that he is strong and durable as a person. Allusion – “Cold wind blows” Eminem This is also an example of allusion because in the song it has two famous people like Bruce banner better known as “The hulk” and it also has Michael J. Fox is a great actor. Onomatopoeia - “Roman’s revenge” by Nicki Minaj ft. Eminem This song has some example of onomatopoeia, when it says “Raah, raah, like a dungeon dragon” because it is making reference to a sound. “Raah” is a sound we believe a dragon makes.

15: Parody – “Meet the Spartans” by Jason Friedberg, Aaron Seltzer This movie is a parody of many different movies. This is parody because it makes fun of different movies. This movie is a funny version of the movie 300. This movie is also funny because it has the Ghost Rider, Rocky Balboa, the Autobots, and an ugly hunchbacked Paris Hilton and a shaved-head Brittany Spears. Oxymoron – “Cinderella man” by Eminem This is an example of an oxymoron because as we all know that Cinderella was an enchanted princess. This is an example because Cinderella is a woman and it is placed with the opposite word in this case man. This is an example of an oxymoron, Cinderella man. Hyperbole – “So Bad” by Eminem I'm the American dream! This is an example of a hyperbole because he is extending that he is the American dream when no one can possibly be the American dreams. A hyperbole is like extending the truth. So in this song it’s extending the truth. Personification – “You’re never over” by Eminem This song has an example of personification because in the first line of the song it says “The days are cold livin’ without you” because it’s giving a non-human thing human traits. Days can’t be living. Metaphor – “Space Bound” by Eminem This song has an example of a metaphor because in the chores it says “I’m a space bound rocket ship and your hearts the moon” is a metaphor because its not using like or as to compare two things together in this case he his comparing himself as a rocket ship and a heart to the moon.

16: Now And Then

18: Now I’m lying on my bed. It’s Thursday 14, 2010. Its 9:15 and it’s pouring outside. I’m bored with nothing to do. The TV is on but no one is watching it. I look at my phone there are about 5 text messages on it. I slide my finger to unlock it but didn’t really read or reply to them. I’m laying on my bed, no one home and just looking at the blank wall. Then I’m walking with a group of friends. It’s the same old people I hang with Miguel, William, Zykieme, Julio, Sakai, and Jose. We’re walking home from school like usual. William is always making fun of Julio. Sakai, Miguel and I are acting stupid like always, chasing each other, hitting school bus with snowballs. Zykieme always left after school his mom will always tell him to come home. Jose is just in the back of the group. One of the buses stops the driver comes out but before he started yelling we are already on the next block. Now I walk down stairs. I pour water, ice and some kiwi & strawberry juice in a cup. I grab a bag of chips and head up the stairs. My parents took my sister to her karate class and my cousin is out with his girlfriend. I look outside and it’s still pouring. I make a huge sigh and go back to my bed. My favorite TV show is on but I just ignore it. I lay back and thinking about that moment.

19: Then William and Sakai walk are walking home now. Me, Miguel and José stay back at a park in front of the library. I took a black mild from my pocket and Miguel took out a liter. I checked to see if there was no polices close by. Miguel lights up the mild and he starts smoking it. Jose was up next but he doesn’t do it. I grab it started smoking it. I look around and the streets were empty. No cars, no people and no police. We put it out before we reached José’s house. I left that day smelling like the black mild but I didn’t care. Now I turn off the TV. Go down stairs and pour my juice out. I walk back up stairs slowly I feel a pain on my leg when I walk up but I just ignore it. I went up one hand on the rail. I go to my room and look outside. It’s now 10:00 and no one is home. Nothing to do but just sleep. I go on my bed, close my eye and before you know it I’m asleep. | Now and Then

20: I Am

21: I am Hispanic and I love to play soccer. I wonder what I am going to be when I grow up. I hear music . I see lights. I want a car. I am Hispanic and I love to play soccer. I pretend to be a superhero. I feel happy. I touch my phone. I worry about y grandparents. I am Hispanic and I love to play soccer. I understand why the police stop me. I say I’m funny. I dream about becoming rich. I hope I can get a better job. I am Hispanic and I love to play soccer.

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