FC: THE BLACK DOOR BY: Denise Lopez
1: As i heard someone call my name twice Ashley! Ashley! I got up and went to go see who it was as I came around the corner of the hall I saw my dad waiting and then he said" Hey can you go and fetch me my hammer ?" So I went down stairs and into the basement. As I opened the door, i could see bright flourescent colors shining all over the room but, as I turned the light on they all disappeared, so I turned it off again to see were all these lights were coming from. I searched and I searched until I found a dark door hidden behind a large brown shelf.
2: After that I started to push and push until I could see all dark. Then, I tried to open it but it seemed to be jammed so I pulled and kick it the pop!a big bright light appeared as it was wide open I began to grow curious If I should go in so as I walked in another world appear then Bang! as I looked behind me to see what it was I saw that the door had shut closed and started to fade away.
3: Next I started to shake so i began to walk into the wood as time went by I started to see something black at first it seemed like a hill but as I approached it started to make movement as I got closer and closer then a dragon appeared, so I ran behind a tree. I thought I was safe then CRACK! when I stepped on the tree branch but as I can turn my back there standing in front of me stood the dragon I started to shake it was like a earthquake had erupt.
4: A father is someone to look up to no matter how tall you get. | Later it started to put its' head down and then it said, "Are you lost?" I dint know what to say I started to stutter and I said, "Yes very anxious." Then I asked, "what's your name?" She said, "Blackfire." I said, "My name is Ashley. "
5: After that she said, "Hop on my back." and then I asked, "Where are we going?" Then she said, "I'm going to help you find your way home." Then I saw that we were up in the bright blue sky I looked down then I started to see a dark blue lake and even tiny people who looked like ant walking on the ground and even a dark green forests as we started to go low. I got off her back and she said for me to go home you will have to pass the evil witch's layer. As we were walking we came upon a little man. His name was Jerry as he told us then she showed us the way to the witch's kingdom then he said the only way to go home is enter a big black gate.
6: Then as we entered we had to hide from the witch's soldiers. As we were walking looking around we found the door that lead back to my house. Then we turned around there were two soldiers aapproaching us they shot out fire so I made a run for it and headed for the door.
7: Finally, as I opened it I came out of my treehouse. As I got out I saw that I was really home so entered through the back door and made my way back to the basement. I got the hammer and put it back on the shelf where it was. I looked at it one more time and the door disappeared. I told myself I would never forget how much fun I had there.