S: The Healer
BC: No info or pictures on diet or clothing of the two time periods. -12 No citations; orobably because you didn't do the research. -12
FC: missing title and author -3 pts | 21/103
1: By Kassandra Baez | The Healer | missing required picture -3 pts | Incomplete | grammatical errors -6
2: 1600s | -Most people grew thier own medical plants -Minerals, plants, and animal's parts to create their receipts. [fragment and does not make sense-edit!] -Many spices that are used today were very important ingredients for healing -Doctors normally had a garden so the can [verb tense changed] plant medicine.
3: 21st century | -Doctors now in days [drop-unnecessary verbiage] in the 21st century, don't even make their medicine, scientists do. -We still use make medicines from plants and animals but its way easier to get them because of money and other financial advantages. -Everything [everything? like what?] is now technology.[too simplistic--where do the medicines come form and are they better? Why? Do your research!]
4: 1600s | -Social class are economic or cultural. [Fragment--What does this mean?] -Back then they didn't care if there [their] healer had licenses or experience they just wanted help. [Are you sure they didn't care? Is this from research??] -Healers were anatomist of history. [explain what this means.] -Shocking[ly], woman were more important then men when it came to healing, because of the sensitivity[sensitivity of or to what] and breast milk and the ability to give birth.
5: -Its against the law not to have your licenses in the medical field. You need at least 4 years of school in college to start your career as a medical patrician [This is incorrect and obviously not researched. -45]
6: 1600s | DIET