S: Being Perfect
FC: Almost Perfect | by Viraj Mehta
1: Once upon a time, there was a little boy named Louis who was good at most things and great at a few.
2: But, he would always make little mistakes. He "was definitely and finally salao, which is the worst form of unlucky" (Hemingway 9).
3: He tried very hard but could never be perfect..
4: He was almost perfect at school.
5: He was almost perfect at home.
6: He was almost perfect on video games.
7: He was almost perfect on the electric violin.
8: He was sad because he wasn't perfect.
9: "It is silly not to hope, he thought" (Hemingway 104). He started to practice and study. He worked hard.
10: "I feel confident today" (Hemingway 23), said Louis before his final exam.
11: When the test results came back the next day he got a 100!
12: He was even perfect at video games.
13: And he was happy.