BC: My story is about a 26 year old man named Tommy Newberry who is a super hero. He has to defeat the bad guy that robbed the bank and he does with the help of a policeman.
FC: The bad guy that robbed the bank By Connor
1: Once upon a time there lived a 26 year old man named Tommy Newberry he is a super hero. Tommy saves people from bad guys if he can .He also puts bad guys in jail. Ring! Ring The alarm rang .Tommy got out of bed, went to the kitchen and made some pancakes with cranberry juice.
2: Then Tommy went to take a walk, suddenly he saw a bad guy robbing the bank. Quickly Tommy chased the bad guy, but the bad guy ran faster. Tommy couldn't catch him. Tommy failed his duty. Quickly he checked if anyone was hurt in the bank. There was no one was hurt in the bank.
3: Then Tommy went home and thought of how to get the money back and return it to the bank . He couldn't think of anything, he snarled. He wanted to give up but he didn't give up . So, he thought more and more.Then he said, “AHH! I can't think. When he was about give up again he found an idea.
4: In the morning Tommy went to the polices office and asked, “Can you help me find the bad guy that robbed the banks house and help me defeat him’’. Then they were looking for his house but they didn't find it. After they found his house, they looked at the house. It was a really dark looking house, they checked the window Tommy saw the bad guy house they quickly opened the door and started to fight With the bad guy. Then,
5: Quickly the bad guy threw Tommy and the policeman on the hard ground.Tommy was hurt a lot. When the bad guy was about to pick up Tommy, rapidly Tommy punched the bad guy in the gut. Then Tommy threw the bad guy on the ground and kicked him 4 times. Tommy said’’ stop stealing stuff ‘’. The bad guy replied fine’’ I will ’’.
6: The Bad guy gave the money to Tommy. Then, when Tommy and the police man were leaving, quickly the bad guy punched Tommy and the police man. The bad guy said to Tommy I’’ tricked you.The Tommy recovered fast but, the police man was on the ground. Then the bad guy and Tommy were trying to punch each other, Tommy punched the bad guy first.
7: So Tommy picked him up, but the bad guy punched Tommy hard in the stomach. Then the bad guy grabbed Tommy, quickly the police man kicked the bad guy in the head the bad guy fell down on the ground. Then Tommy picked him up and knocked him out with his fist. Then Tommy and the police man got the money and went out of the bad guy’s house and returned it to the bank. Tommy was happy at home he and the police man returned the money.
8: Tommy was happy at home because he and the police man returned the money. It's all about honesty!
9: About the author Connor is nine years old, lives in Lebanon, and likes to play soccer. He also likes to read books and write stories.