S: Forrest Angles Sydney Souliere
BC: "Forrest Angles" Ben and his dog Lola go on this fabulous adventures. One day Ben and Lola see two angles a a harp that is glowing. Maybe the harp is Magical and maybe it has a special purpose? You will never know unless you read the book. So, if you want to go on fabulous adventures.
FC: "Forrest Angels" By: Sydney Souliere
1: I'd like to dedicate this book to my parents for being the best parents they can possibly be. - Sydney Souliere
2: Ben and his dog Lola were walking in the forest. All of a sudden they see a harp and some ripples in the water of the stream. They walked across the stream and to their surprise they see two angels. One angel was a normal white one but the other angel was black with big black wings! “Wow!” said Ben. Have you ever seen a black winged angel before? “ I wonder if they have names?” Of course we do!” said Mackenzie “Hello, I’m Mackenzie! ( the GOOD angel in white).” “ Hi, I’m Eavil (the BAD angel in black)...” And in case you didn’t know, six strings on that harp over there are good and six strings on the harp are bad.
3: The angels rushed towards the harp in GREAT force to be the first one to reach it. Both Mackenzie and Eavil reached the harp at the same time and made Ben and Lola touch different sides and when they touched the white side they acted good and when they touched the black side they acted really, really bad!
4: Eavil made Lola touch the BAD strings and Lola did some BAD things, she tried to get a grasp of the HARP, slowly step by step she reached out thinking that she would get a hold of it, but she MISSED! (gasp) Again and again she tried but now her paws were slipping OFF. Finally, she just got a hold of it but Mackenzie saw what she was trying to do while she was talking to Ben.
5: “Hold that thought” she said. Behind everyones backs, she flew as fast as a vampire could run `to Lola. When she got there (which was very QUICK) she picked her up. “ WOW!’ Ben how many pounds does she WEIGH?!”she asked “Ne-Ne- Never mind that doesn't matter anymore” she said loudly. Mackenzie flew to the harp and almost touched the worst string in the angel world but luckily she didn’t , when she got to the harp she MADE Lola touch the string that was good! Eavil was furious! He went underwater to think a little and when he came up to the surface EVERYTHING, I MEAN EVERYTHING WAS GOOD! That made him furious again but, he didn’t go back underwater. Eavil wondered if anybody had thought that he made a plan.
6: I guess not” he said with a smirk. “ I have the BEST PLAN in the world” he shouted out loud. “ What?” said the others! “Nothing” he said quickly. Mackenzie was sure that he had a plan because bad angels don’t tell the truth. She wanted to tell Ben but it hurt her to say mean things because she is a good angel. Do Ben and Lola know that angels can fly? she thought. If I were to say anything Eavil would know! “Maybe I can put the harp underwater were NO one will know of, she said quietly to herself. So, when they weren’t looking she flew to the harp, grabbed it and pulled it underwater very slowly that no one could see that she was underwater.
7: When she was down underwater and came back up and NO ONE was there!
8: Oh NO! said Mackenzie! I’m not sure where they are!? They might be in Eavils’layer? What if he is going to hurt them? she asked to herself. Am I going to risk my life to save other people? Okay let me think this through... If I can change myself and my surroundings then I might be able to pull this off! But, I’m not sure if I could tell Christian (my master) because he might think that I want to change but it would be good because I’m saving Ben and his dog Lola. “I don’t know what to do” she cried “If I did I might die.” “ Ya know as my job as a good angel is to help people so... that means I should risk my life to help Ben and Lola and lots others. So, I made my final decision “I am going to risk my life to save others. Because that’s what good angels should do and I’m a good angel.” So, she made a plan! “Okay, if I can paint the color black on my old pair of wings than I might be able to pull it off!” “But, what if they fall off”. “Okay Mackenzie I have to think about the positives not the negatives”! “What if Eavil sees me“ “Maybe he will think that I’ve turned to the bad side and turned evil or maybe he will know that I know that he took Ben and Lola and I’ve came to get them but then he notices my wings and says Oh well than look at that she is actually dark winged angel so that means she actually turn to us now I wounder if her master Christian knows about this he might not since she is a bad angel and bad angels don’t tell the truth she thought well lets find out!” “The air is so beautiful”she said loudly. After, 2 hours Mackenzie finally got there. “Oh, my I’m finally here. Okay, I will paint my wings black so I can get into the building”. Mackenzie went into the building and Eavil didn’t even notice her but she noticed him. She walked all around in search of Ben and Lola. She couldn’t belive nobody notice her with her nice teeth, her well brushed red and orange hair color, and her smile everybody said she had the best smile anyone had ever seen,by the way everybody was half asleep and she was wide awake.
9: After, 2 hours Mackenzie finally got there. “Oh, my I’m finally here. Okay, I will paint my wings black so I can get into the building”. Mackenzie went into the building and Eavil didn’t even notice her but she noticed him. She walked all around in search of Ben and Lola. She couldn’t believe nobody notice her with her nice teeth, her well brushed red and orange hair color, and her smile everybody said she had the best smile anyone had ever seen,by the way everybody was half asleep and she was wide awake.
10: What if that means that Stacey( Eavil’s master) had put them all on slow motion and even Ben and Lola! Oh, NO she said really fast to the others because the other dark angels could only do and speak slowly. Wait, she had to put slow motion on her to because that’s the only way to do it. So, that means that she has slow eye sight so if can find Ben and Lola really fast she might not notice!”
11: Step by step Mackenzie looked everywhere and in the corner of her eye she saw what she was looking for she saw Ben and Lola tied up in the corner of the room. “Finally, I had found them. Yes!” She ran over to them and untied them as fast as she could. “Come on guys. Wake up. Guy’s? Hello? Wake up!? Oh, no...she said with a cry. Eavil must have Eavil must have killed them. Why? Why? Did he kill them why didn’t he just keep them and train them to be bad angels why?” She flew them over to the harp again were they first met.
12: “A least they are together.” After a lot of tears she buried them.
13: About the Author Hi, my name is Sydney Souliere I am in 4th and 10 years old. I'm in Mrs. Durigan's class 2010- 2011. The sports I play are.. softball and skiing. I play the Violin. I started playing the Violin this year actually, my violin teacher is Mr. Ryan Williams. He also makes violin class very fun. I have a mom, dad, and brother named Justin. My favorite color is Purple. My favorite books are Ruby Holler and The sisters Grimm. I love school and never want to leave.I will always look back at this book and see how I wrote "Forrest Angles" and look at the pictures I drew and maybe draw the same pictures and see how I draw differently. And I will always remember that I love to write and I might be able to give this assignment to my students if I become a teacher. Which is my dream.I hope to become a teacher like Mrs. Durigan.I will always remember this book.