S: By: Dima and Isac
FC: The story of Louie
1: Louie is a hamster. He lives in New York in a hole by a hamburger shop. | Louie loves going to the hamburger shop. He eats there a lot.
2: Louie has a scooter to help him go around because of his weight.
3: Louie has a friend named Bob and Bob is a human. | Louie does not listen and trust Bob. | Sometimes Louie's tail moves when there is something fishy going on. His tail always moves when Bob is around.
4: One night Louie was sleeping and he heard a crash outside.
5: Then Louie came up stairs and rode his scooter to the Hamburger Shop. | Then Louie hears another crash.
6: Then Louie headed inside and walked around to see want had happened. | Then Louie saw the night guard. He was all tied up in ropes.
7: When Louie was walking around, he all of a sudden saw Bob taking money from the cash register. Louie knew that Bob was bad.
8: Then Louie, remembering from his ninja classes, he snuck up on Bob. | Louie kicked and punched Bob with lighting fast ninja skills.
9: Louie got Bob down, he ran to the guard and untied him. He also called the police | Bob got arrested and was put in jail for life time.
10: A month later Louie was in D.C. with the president getting a award and a reward of 3 million dollars.
11: After a month Louie had one hundred hamburger shops around the U.S. called Louie's Hamburger Shop, and he built a big house for himself.
12: Louie's gazebo. Louie's summer house | Louie in his car
13: The End