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What Goes Around Comes Around

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FC: What Goes Around Comes Around By: Collin Riegel

1: Dedication | This gory short story is dedicated to all of my close friends ,family, and Mr. Tim O'Connor

2: Key: Read from top to bottom on columns

3: Do not read bottom then top

4: Jake does it again! He wins the school basketball game at the last second with a shot from way beyond the three-point line. Everybody floods the court and surrounds Jake.

5: "You did Jake!" "Your my hero" "Awesome Job, Jake your the best." Are only some of the things that people say to Jake as he is thrown up in the air again and again. Everybody is in love with Jake.

6: Jake then after a night of parting after his outstanding performance he put on at the school's basketball against there heated rivals; goes home for a nice rest. "Wow, I didn't know being so good at basketball makes you so tired." Jake explained. | WOW!

7: After a goods night rest Jake wakes up, stretches, and eats a big bowl of cereal. As he gets ready for his big day at school. After the big win. | But, when Jake goes to school he changes. | Lets Go!

8: When Jake gets to school he becomes a snotty bully that particularly picks on one certain kid named Kevin. Jake does a lot of mean stuff to Kevin. From putting him in trash cans to... | Hahaha!

9: ...knocking his books out of his hands, calling him names, laughing at every little thing that Kevin does.

10: After a long day of bullying Jake goes to the gym to play some basketball. | While, Jake is playing he has been noticing some things that have been out of place or unusual occurences. | Gee! Thats hard work! | ? | Clank! | Click!

11: He keeps hearing strange noises, also feeling like someone is watching him which makes him feel uneasy. | Click! Clank! Boom! Bang! Sssssss! Poof!

12: Then when Jake shoots the ball into the air it vanishes and then appears right next to him in a destroyed stage with fang holes in the side. When Jake looks back up from the dismangled ball a dark figure stands in front of him with an unpleasing facial expression.

13: "W-w-w-w-h-h-h-h-o-o-o are you?" Jake sudders "I am Micheal Smith, Kevin Smith's great grandpa." replies the dark figure. "I-i-i-i-i know that kid from school." Jake explains. | With a terrified look on Jake's face, comes up with enough courage to ask "What do you want from me." "I would like for you to stop bullying my great grandchild". | "Oh ya no problem. It was just some playful hazing." replies Jake. "YOU SHOVED HIM IN A TRASH CAN!" the ghost screams shaking the whole intire building.

14: "Okay, sir I am very sorry and will stop immadiatly." "Have a nice night Jake." says the ghost. Then Jake went home still terrified and his heart still has not started beating again. | When Jake wakes up he says to himself "Gee, I am defintly not going to mess with Kevin anymore. As he trudges off to school. | Have a nice night!

15: When Jake is walking in the hall he identifies Kevin walking down the hall. He musters up enough strength not to hit his books out of his hands and laugh at his face. | But, Jake's friends are not aware of what happened to Jake last night and they continue to bully Kevin.

16: Jake does not know about his friends still bullying Kevin or else he would of stopped the bullying right away. But, Jake thinks it was a really good day and he won't get in trouble with the dark figure. So, he thinks.... | Then when Jake gets home settles down and gets ready for bed. Then when he is about to fall asleep he hears strange noises the same kind that he heard when he was playing basketball. The noises were very very uneasy to Jake.

17: Jake does not think anything of the noises until all the basketballs in his room pop as loud as cannon. 30 basketballs popping all at once doesn't make any sense Jake thinks to himself. Then, when he turns around to look at all the basketballs and what happened. | Then when he turns back around a dark figure standing at the foot of his bed has a very unforgiving facial expression. The dark figure whispers "Remember Me!" "Y-y-y-y-y-y-ye-e-e-e-e-s-s-s-s-s-s." sudders Jake. "I did not bully your great grandchild once today, sir." "Thats not what my spotter said too me" replied the ghost. | POP! | Remember Me!

18: Then Jake looks to the left of his bed and another dark figure is staring directly into his eyes. Then the new figure replied "Oh, wait this isn't the kid. Wrong guy; this kid was off in the corner the whole day. My bad boss." "Your caught a break kid you hear me, and I will be back and you can count on it son!" "Ok, sir." replied Jake. | Wait! Oh, wrong guy. This is the wrong kid, boss.

19: Jake finally got off to sleep that night and woke up the next day and said "I don't want to see what will happen if I do even touch this kid named Kevin." | But, Jake made the biggest mistake of his life and maybe his last mistake at school today. When Jake was walking down the hall he was unaware of Kevin who was on coming with a load of books in his hands. | Jake accidently bumped into Kevin knocking all of his books onto the ground. As, Jake was walking away completely unaware of his mistake.

20: Jake went on with the day like no other and was actualiy a pretty good day, Jake thought to himself. He is still clueless about what may happen this night. Jake gets ready for bed and lays down in his bed and is about to fall asleep. | Then a supersonic boom explodes in Jake's ears which makes him deaf. No one else could here the boom though. Then his room flashed with a light brighter than sun blinds him in his room, no else sees the light to help him. | Pretty Good Day! | BOOM! | FLASH!

21: At this point Jake is deaf and blind and completely unaware of his surroundings and the two 10 feet tall dark figures standing at the foot of his bed. The figure on the left explains "That's him he did it again, boss." | "Good" replied the figure on the right and "Lets give him what he deserve!" shouts the figure on the right. "Lets do it, boss!" Then............. | LETS DO IT BOSS!

22: No one ever saw Jake ever again. Nobody including Jake knows what happened to the all-star basketball player. | The cops gave up looking after 30 years. There were no clues, no witness, no signs, no ideas, and thousands of questions. But no one to this day knows the where abouts or what happened to Jake.

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