FC: The Monkeys Paw retold by Justin Cordova
1: My name is Justin cordova.I like play on a team because you can meet new people and learn new thing that you did not know .
2: we live in a nice peaceful house with my mom and pa
3: sergeant major morris takes out a cursed monkeys paw and I was scared because I did not know what it does. morris is a friend of my dad.
4: my dad made the first wish to have $ 200 but we did not think it was true so we just went to sleep.
5: i went to work at a toy factory and before i knew it i had my hand cut off by the machine. i was on the way to the ER but i died going. sadly i did not get to say good bye to my mom an dad .
7: My dad made his 2 nd wish for me to come back .I am happy to come back. The dead people told me to rise up out of the ground. i knock on the door and hear my mom and dad talking to each other. i hear my mom saying "help me unlock this door" but my mom did not hear what i had said "i have a hunger for brains."
8: "mom and a dad i am home can y'all open the door so i can eat your brains and it is cold out here" I said.
9: my dad wishes for me to be gone. But before death takes me, i have to tell u some thing mom and dad: "i miss living with you and miss y'all. well bye now i have to go."