FC: Cinderella Redux
1: Written and Illustrated by Ashleigh Hampton, with some help from Mixbook! This is an example of what student work might look like using the lesson plan provided in the back of the book.
2: Once opon a time there lived a young woman. Her name was Cinderella. She lived with her mean step mother and her two mean step sisters.
3: The two step sisters and step mother made Cinderella do all the work in the house. They were very mean to her.
4: Cinderella lived in a kingdom that was ruled by a king and queen. They had a son who was a handsome prince. His name was Charming.
5: One day, while Cinderella was doing laundry, an invitation arrived to the house. It was to announce a large party. It was to celebrate Prince Charming's 22nd birthday. All of the young ladies of the land were invited.
6: Cinderella asked her step mother if she would be allowed to go to the ball. Her step mother yelled at her and told her she could not go.This made Cinderella cry.
7: A passing fairy overheard cinderella crying in her room. She decided to help Cinderella.
8: The fairy made Cinderella beautiful for the ball, and got her a great car to ride in.
9: But the fairy told Cinderella that she had to be back by midnight or the spell would be broken and she would lose all her beautiful things.
10: Cinderella danced with the prince at the ball and had a wonderful time. But she forgot to watch the clock, and suddenly it was midnight!
11: As she was running out the door, Cinderella lost one of her pretty blue shoes. The prince was following her and found it.
12: The prince didn't know who Cinderella was, so he looked far and wide through the kingdom, taking the shoe with him, and having many maidens try it on.
13: Finally, the prince came to Cinderella's house, and asked her to try on the shoe. But as he knelt to put the shoe on her foot, Cinderella was struck by a wonderful idea!
14: Cinderella decided to start her own shoe company, so that no girl would ever have to have worry about losing a shoe ever again. She would call her company the House of Cinders.
15: And so Cinderella became one of the most famous shoe designers in the kingdom. Her step sisters and step mother worked in one of Cinderella's shoe factories and helped sew together her beautiful shoes. They hated it.
16: Cinderella lived in a beautiful palace, and of course had hundreds of wonderful shoes.
17: And as for the prince...
18: He worked for Cinderella, too. He brought her her morning coffee every day. He loved it.
19: The End.