BC: i liked how u described everything. your vocab was very good to. | i had trouble understanding some parts and it was kinda short but not bad -AJ
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3: I saw the bikes across the aisle from me. Then I turned my head and saw my brothers getting up. Suddenly the lights turned on and I saw Bill. A minute later I saw the other employers as Dick’s Sporting Goods was about to open. I was there just waiting to get bought. While I was said to Bill if looking at the bikes around me. I suddenly was lifted and saw my football brothers getting farther oway.
5: It was a man with a black suit. Then man he could get me engraved. Bill answered yes. Then Bill went to the back room and started writing on me. Then Bill gave me back to the man in the black tux. Then the man took me to his white car. It was like a pearl it was so shiny. Then he drove to another store it was called Wrapped
6: . He picked me up and took me into the store then. I was put into a box. Then I heard tape and the CRINKLE of wrapping paper. Then I was lifted and was racking back and forth. Splat I was dropped again then I heard the rare of a car’s engine. Also I heard beeps and honks like as if I was in a car on the high way. An hour later we finally stopped and I heard a door open and close. I was worried and scared, the I was lifted. Scared to death I legend and I heard then man trying to open a door with a key. Then he opened it and I was drooped on a table.
9: . I waited and waited for something to happen. But it never did instill one day. I heard come in kids and BOOM! It sounded like a herd of cows but it was kids. I was there waiting for somebody to pick me up but no one did. Instead they sang the happy birth day song. After that I heard yelling cake. In my mind it was a birth day and I was a present.
11: Then a woman yield it’s time for presents. In that time foots steps were getting closer and closer. My heart was pounding and I was getting ready for anything that might happen. Zip CRAK I was getting opened and then I saw the light. “Hey Danny your dad got you a foot ball it has your name on it”. “Thanks dad for the foot ball” yield Danny. “Your welcome Danny” joked Danny’s dad. After that the mom of the kid said thanks for coming and all the kids left. Then the kid took me into his room and put me udder his bed.
13: Then I turned around and I saw a basketball, a baseball, and a soccer ball. “Hey I am basket” “Hey I am soccer” “And I am base” “Hey whets your name” ask a ball with chokers on him. “Don’t scar the kid” said basket. “He is a football, he is not scared.” “Who are you guys” I asked. “Were Danny’s other sports.” “So I am Danny’s football” I said “Yes you are that’s why you have his name on you”. “My name is Knead.” I told then “Ok Knead gets some rest Danny propply going to play with you tomorrow.” After Soccer said that we all went to sleep.
15: The next morning Danny took me out with some of his friends. As I was tossed for the first time. I felt as if I was flying .They played and played. Also I was in the air. When Danny’s mom said lunch all his friends went to go eat. But they left me behind. Suddenly I was attacked by a dog and. I feel into the sunwards wait and wait for someone to get me out. As I was about to lose hope a cat pushed and I saw a light. It was getting closer and closer. Then I was out of the smelly suwards. I heard a bus and kids getting out. “Hey Danny is that your ball” “Dude yea it is my ball.” I was found and when I got back to the guys I told them the story.