BC: About the Author | Ava Ollenburg is a 10 year old at Clear Creek Elementry School. She is in 4th grade. Ava has 2 sisters and no brothers. She loves to draw and write.
FC: Tommorrowland Tragedy By: Ava Ollenburg
1: Dedicated To All Those Future Freaks
2: Welcome to paradise, and welcome to an island with luxury! Welcome to Tommorrowland! | Scientists say Tommorrowland is the next best island. It was made just last year by an undiscovered volcano and scientists from the island are still trying to recover
3: from under the island it is a very hard job. But have you heard the mythical story about what happened on this island. Well I’ll start here telling you about the most tragic story you have ever heard about anything, anything at all.
4: One day a 27 year old woman was getting on the transit this women had been homeless as a little girl because her parents had died in a tragic fire that ripped their family apart. This woman’s name was Annabelle, before her parents died Annabelle and her family were the richest people in town, until the fire got started.
5: I want to start from the beginning of this story . Once a long, long time ago, lived a family the Schwartz family John, Lily, Annabelle, and Mickey. They were sitting in their living room listening to music, and getting ready to go to bed. They were all going up to their room’s to sleep. Once everyone was asleep, well not everyone the littlest Annabelle was up that night, she
6: loves books this is why she is up so much later than the rest of her family, she has thousand’s of books, and she’s read almost all of them. But one night when Annabelle was up reading she smelled something burning. She quickly hurried downstairs and saw a fire. Annabelle quickly ran out of the house hoping her parent’s and her brother would come out safely,
7: but all she saw was her house falling down in a million tiny pieces and her family going with it. | As she was crying she saw someone patting her back. “Is that you mom?” she said quietly. The person quietly said back “no, but I know what you’ve been through,” the person said sadly. “Who are you, and what do you want?” “ I don’t want anything from you” said the strange man, and he left quietly.
8: That night Annabelle wasn’t used to being poor and she slept on the ground. The next day she woke up and wanted to take a shower like she usually did. But she couldn’t she didn’t have a shower. When she figured out how dirty she was she walked 19 miles to get to future river.future river.
9: Little Annabelle thought the river was just to get water but what she didn’t know was that it made you see the future. She carefully looked into the river and saw herself as a beautiful young women. She then figured out that her life may not be as bad as it was! So Annabelle tried to enjoy herself making friends, playing games, but it still wasn’t the same without her family.
10: 20 years later when Annabelle was 27 she was getting on the transit she was going to a job interview as a lawyer in Metro City. She really wanted the job, then she could buy her own house! Once Annabelle got to Metro City she called a taxi, “TAXI” she yelled, and she was on her way. When she got to the building she took a deep breath and went to the intreview.
11: room and said “ Hi my name is Annabelle, Annabelle Schwartz, I am 27 years old and I’d really love this job” Then the people taking the interview took Annabelle into a room and asked some questions. Annabelle knew the answer to every single one of them! Later that day she got a call from the interview, they said “ Congratulations you’ve been chosen to be a lawyer”
12: Annabelle was astonished, she was so excited that she went to the coffee shop sat down with her computer and looked for some houses for sale. She finally found an apartment she loooved! The next day she went to the realtor's and said “I’d like to buy this apartment.” So the realtor’s took her to the apartment and Annabelle found it even more interesting than the online version.
13: At the end of the tour she wanted the apartment so bad, so she bought it. 3 weeks later when she was moved in her friends from when she was a kid came over to play. Annabelle tried not to cry but her friends reminded her too much about her family. So Annabelle decided to go searching for her family she said to herself “ If I survived
14: the fire they could have too!” So she searched forever and finally she remembered her hometown, Washington D.C! She went there and searched everywhere and on the 23rd day of searching she found her family, they had built a new house in the same spot their old one was in! Annabelle was happy and finally found her family!
15: The End