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BC: The End

FC: Cinder By: Vinny Vincenzo

1: Once upon a time in a large castle there lived a princess with the name of Charlotte. People considered her the perfect princess except for one thing she didn't have a prince and her parents were worried.

2: So they decided to throw a ball and which ever person Charlotte liked she married. Every one in the kingdom was giddy, but in a village far away one family was the most exited.

3: It was Cinder, his 2 step brothers, and his step dad. Cinder didn't like this family they always made her do chores and hard labor. Now that the ball was coming up she had to do even more.

4: After he finished his work he asked them if he could go to the ball but they said no. once they left Cinder went outside to get rid of some stress but before he could a floating man came to him in a poof.

5: "I am your fairy god father" boomed the man "awesome!" Cinder said the man told Cinder that he would give him what he needed for the ball but with one catch he had to be home by 12;00

6: As soon as he was all ready he went to the ball in his limo with a chauffeur to drive him. when he got to the ball the party had started there were people dancing and people chatting.

7: Then the king and queen told everyone that it was time to meat the princess. When she walked in people fainted one by one people danced with her and chatted with her. Finally it was Cinders turn.

8: They went straight to waltzing they talked laughed and had fun Charlotte and Cinder knew they were perfect together but then the clock rang as 12:00 came he remembered what the his fairy godfather said.

9: He ran out of the castle accidentally leaving a shoe behind but he didn't care he ran once he got hoe he was back to his normal cloths he quickly picked up a mop and pretended like he had been doing that already.

10: When his family got home he asked them how the ball was and they told him it was terrible because of this man that hogged Charlotte to himself. Then they told him about the man running away and the shoe.

11: Finally they said they were looking for the man and whoever fit the shoe she would marry after 2 hours there was a knock on the door and the princess came in one by one they tried on the shoe then Cinder asked if he could.

12: Cinder sat on the chair as the princess slipped on his shoe. Once it was on it was a perfect fit! The step brothers screamed when they found out Cinder was the one. The princess leaped up and hugged him.

13: After they found him he proposed to her and they lived happily in the kingdom. As for the step brothers and step dad well lets just say there wont be any more pampering for them.

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  • Title: Cinder
  • Cinderella with switched characters.
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  • Published: almost 4 years ago

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