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FC: Ch | Christmas Kidnapping By: Adil Awwal

1: Christmas night. The most popular night of kidnappings in Los Angeles. | Detective Parker is strolling down Crime Alley and is looking around for any suspicious behavior.

2: Clack! Clack! A gang of thugs is hot on detective Parker. "If only i can make a sharp turn onto a main road then i can get out of this mess." "Wait i can climb that fire escape and maybe escape..."

3: Detective Parker sees a minivan screech in front of him and open the door. | "That minivan seems to offer me some help, guess I should jump in there than get hurt out here."

4: Detective Parker leaps in the car and quickly shuts the door behind him. He hears the car lock click and then faces the driver Baxter... | ...Blood. Baxter Blood is only known to be the most ruthless crime boss in all of Los Angeles . He is known to never forgive anybody, even his step brother Edward. "It took a while for you to wake up from that gas," he said with is deep voice.

5: That is when Detective Parker realized he was put to sleep,instead of being put DOWN. That is when Detective Parker realized he was stuck with a pair of police handcuffs. "Just taking extra precautions," bellowed Blood. | Detective Parker asked,"What do you want to do to me today, you fool." Baxter replied,"Oh all I wanted to do was give you a good present for old times.

6: Detective Parker knew what this meant. Instead of killing him, Baxter wanted Detective to feel the pain slowly for a more intense type of torture. | "Hey can you look back while I put the car in reverse?" All the mirrors are messed up. Detective Parker looks back when he sees a couple near their forties lying in the back. Dead.

7: "A couple near their forties, minivan, means kids, which means toys under the seat," the detective thoughT. | He began his brief search of finding a small child's toy which could save his live. He remembered not make any suspicious behavior.

8: "Its been a looong night," Blood said. "Lets get something to much on.." As Blood drove up to the drive-thru, he ordered a Bacon burger while Detective Parker ordered a Bourbon Burger. | As Blood drove to get the food, the server dropped the drink by accident. Before he could say "Sorry," Blood took out his pistol and shot him to death. Detective Parker couldn't handle it he searched under the seat a little more vigorously and found a child's toy car.

9: As Blood sped away to avoid attracting attention, Detective Parker Popped the wheels of the car and grasped the pin which was holding the wheels together in his hand. | Detective Parker started to got to work on the cuffs. "To many roadblocks today," Baxter said as he rammed into an old man crossing the road with bags of Christmas presents. Detective Parker finally got the hand cuffs to unlock but didn't jump into action right away.

10: Bfff!!!! Bfffff! The minivan started to swerve out of control. "This is L.A.P.D. you are under arrest from kidnapping a law enforcement officer." Detective Parker knew what to do know. | Detective Parker tells Baxter, "Watch out!" Baxter Blood ducks but gets punched in the face by Detective Parker who turns on the emergency brake.

11: "I must have gotten real lucky." Detective Parker says as Baxter closely his eyes after the punch. Detective Parker gets out of the car, puts Baxter Blood in cuffs, and waits for the rest of the police. | Commissioner Paul came up to Detective Parker and said, "Good work, Detective." Detective Parker replied, "I don't think I should trust anyone."

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  • Title: Christmas Kidnapping
  • Don't trust anyone
  • Tags: fiction
  • Published: about 4 years ago

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